For the past five years I have participated in a weekly Zoom/Microsoft Teams call with four friends from the profession. It started during Covid as a way to connect with and check on each other in the midst of professional and personal isolation, and it has since become one of the cornerstones of my week.
From week to week the conversations range from challenges in our personal lives to the changing college admission landscape to deep concerns and fears about the direction of our country. We have shared with each other life transitions, moves, job changes, and battles with illness in ourselves and in our loved ones.
Currently one member of the chat is living through a milestone that several of us have already passed, the last fall of writing recommendation letters. I am probably not as empathetic and supportive as I should be. Given how much time and energy I devoted to writing rec letters throughout my career, and how much satisfaction I felt when I captured a student’s story, I don’t miss that part of my life at all. I don’t know if that means I was not as devoted a counselor as I would like to believe or that when the game ended I left it all on the field (or the desk). As I have told several former colleagues, I could claim that I miss it, but my school has an honor code.
Watching my friend live through the last rec writing season has led me to reflect again on the recommendation letter as art form and college admission convention.
Years ago I received a phone call from the Director of Admission at a flagship state university in the South. He had the admission file of one of my students on his desk, along with a note from one of his staff members who had read the application with a single word, “Why?”. He went on to say that he had read my rec letter and thought he should give the student a chance. I kept waiting for the “but.” He finally said the best he could was offer the student summer admission. I was ecstatic, until he closed the conversation by asking, “Have you ever thought about being a creative writer?”
That question does not necessarily suggest that recommendations are akin to fiction, but rather that they are an art form. The recommendation letter serves several purposes in the admission process. It is part legal brief, making the case for a student. It is part character sketch or word portrait, providing a glimpse into the human being behind the application. And, if we think of a transcript as a primary text, the rec letter serves as the scholarly footnotes that provide context and explanation.
College counselors, particularly at independent schools, find themselves in a loop of cognitive dissonance existing between internal and external constituencies. When I was first hired many years ago, it seemed like the only relevant college counseling skill was the ability to write “The Letter,” being able to generate novelesque prose capable of captivating admission readers and sweeping a student’s application into the admit pile. The recommendation letter is certainly part of a school’s ethos/branding about knowing their students. But the impact of rec letters has become a victim of college admission’s “dirty little secret,” the reality that colleges spend far less time reading a student’s application (including rec letters) than students spend preparing the application.
Do rec letters even get read these days, other than a perfunctory skim? One of the participants on the weekly call recalls working as director of admission at a college where, out of a concern for fairness, counselor letters were removed from application files prior to reading. He also referenced a colleague who had worked at several Ivies stating that a counselor letter hadn’t impacted a single admission decision during her tenure.
That’s depressing for those of us who spend hours each fall trying to tell our students’ stories. At the same time, rec letters are one of the college admission conventions that expand the gap between students with privilege and those without. The artificial elephant in the room is AI, which has the potential to allow counselors with huge student loads to craft more personal rec letters more efficiently. AI also brings with it its own set of ethical challenges (a topic for another time).
The real question is whether colleges should continue to ask for recommendation letters. If you believe in holistic review and that the more information about a student, the better, then yes. But requiring recommendation letters also seems like a relic from the days when applying to college was comparable to applying for membership in an elite social club.
The eternal debate regarding recommendations within college admission is about length. I know some legendary counselors who were renowned for writing three-page, single-spaced letters. Readers of ECA know all too well that brevity is a challenge for me, but I tended to write a page and a half. Many admission reps think anything more than a page is too much, leading to creative formatting. One friend admitted to using seven-point font and narrow margins to keep her letters to one page.
The most popular antidote to concerns about length and whether our letters are read is the bullet point recommendation, which reimagines the rec letter as concise memo rather than flowing literary essay. I know a number of colleagues who have moved to the bullet point format, and their argument is that any piece of writing should ultimately be guided by the needs of the reader. I was either too set in my ways or too in love with my own verbiage to adapt the bullet point rec format, but I did move in recent years to “front-loading” my rec letters. The first paragraph would seek to make the case for the student, serving as an abstract or executive summary in case the admission officer didn’t read the whole letter. The rest of the letter would flesh out the case, and I rarely worried about coming up with a catchy conclusion.
There is one other possible literary genre that might be a way to make recommendations shorter and more punchy. It’s revolutionary, perhaps even insane, but has anyone considered writing rec letters in the style of the Truth Social posts popularized by President Trump? (For those of you recoiling at the suggestion because of your political views, let me observe in the name of “both sidesism” that California governor Gavin Newsom has also found the format to his liking.)
What are the keys to writing a Truth Social rec letter? I’m not a subscriber to Truth Social, so as James Taylor says about Mexico, “I’ve never really been, so I don’t really know,” but here is what I’ve been able to gather about some of the necessary literary devices.
The recommendation is only partly about the student. It’s also about you.
Use the opening paragraph (if you even have paragraphs) to establish your credentials. This is not the time to be modest. For those who believe that it’s not polite to brag, come join us in the 21st century. Have you been described as a “stable genius,” even if only by yourself? Do you deserve the Nobel Peace Prize? Did you ace your cognitive exam? Did you have an uncle who taught at an elite university? The legendary character actor Walter Brennan played a character whose catch phrase was “No brag, just fact.” He was prescient, because today there is a thin line between the two.
Employ a stream of consciousness narrative style.
The more spontaneous, the more genuine the letter will seem. Don’t worry about
spelling and grammar conventions. The best way to accomplish this is to compose when the mind is most unfiltered, between 1 and 5 a.m.
KISS (Keep it simple, Sir)
Throw that thesaurus away, and employ a simple and direct vocabulary. Pay homage to Strunk and White by avoiding needless words. In my freshman college English class (Honors, I’ll point out, in keeping with rule 1), the professor took off a point for every word he deemed needless in our essays. We all started off with a grade of 100, and many of us ended up with a negative grade.
For emphasis, use plenty of…capitalization and be creative with………. ellipses.
Admit………….NOW!
Offer explanations or excuses where necessary. Examples:
“The teacher who gave him a D in Chemistry was a LOW IQ individual!”
“His suspensions for cheating and assaulting a teacher are FAKE NEWS!”
Be appreciative of your reader’s time.
“Thank you for your attention to this matter.”
The Truth Social template for college recommendations may be an idea whose time has not come, but it’s worth considering. It would certainly make your recs stand out. If anyone has already adopted this approach, I’d love to know.
Thank you for your attention to this matter.